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Quite an interesting piece. The contrast of the red against the lack of colors draws the attention quickly and it makes the scene a lot more gruesome that it would simply appear without any colors, also, the character in the back is in a serious dominant, creepy pose which gives you an eeky feeling of being watched.

I like the perspective of the image, the rubble and bodies are well placed between them. Perhaps a little darker shadding might be needed for the hair and back of the clothing for the male body under the girl, as well as the squashed bus. If a certain piece is given light for a purpose, like for example the flower beside and a little backways from the girl perhaps the pieces surrounding it, rubble, tree trunk and such might need a darker shade, still, if there's no particular reason for the lighting then the area should present slightly more shadows or darkness.

Take into consideration the use of a different shading technique for the building, particularly those with conic or dome-like roofs since the semi-curvy lines do little for it. You could perhaps consider crossing lines? add sideways lines to the curvy horizontal lines so it adds to the volume and shading.

I like the coloring of the sky and "moon", they clean and constrast appropriately with the rest of the picture.

Excellent job.